雅思作文新能源利弊

要想达到雅思高分的水平，第一步必须先夯实英语基础，然后再进行单项突破。今天成都申友雅思给大家总结了一些雅思高分会涉及到的语法及其如何运营的攻略，大家先马后看哦~

一、雅思中会涉及的语法： 二、语法在雅思7分中的运用：

1、 时态语态的运用

（1）常用时态

Past：一般过去时、过去进行时-口语

Now：一般现在时、现在进行时、现在完成时-口语

Future：一般将来时-will没有计划，be going to有计划的-口语、小作文图表）

• Part1口语三大高频话题：Hometown, accommodation, work or study

推荐回答：I’m been working as a teacher for four years.

I’ve been studying in XXX University for X years.

I’ve been living in a spacious flat for about four years.

I’ve been living in Shanghai for about four years.

▪  雅思口语中让自己的答案脱颖而出的答案：

I have done/l have been doing sth (ever) since…

I have done/l have been doing sth for…

I've already/never/just…

I've always been quite fond of…

I've been a fan of /infatuated with…ever since…

Sth has/have become…

There has/have been…

（2）被动语态

例：参与 be involved in

暴露 be exposed to

坐落 be located in

沉迷 be addicted to

（3）定语从句

在阅读中的运用：

例1：Fighting Californian wildfires is still not an easy task because the fires ←（the firefighters now face）________（此处应该填动词） in more unpredictable manner in addition to the raging heat and faster speed than ever.

例2：An accident（that occurred in the skies over the Grand Canyon in 1956）resulted in the establishment of the Federal Aviation Administration(FAA) to regulate and oversee the operation of aircraft in the skies over the United States, （which were becoming quite congested.）The resulting structure of air traffic control has greatly increased the safety of light in the United States, and similar air traffic control procedures are also in place over much of the rest of the world.

Heading：Aviation disaster prompts action.

2、在听力中的运用：

例1：So what you’ve learnt from it would be too little for the amount of time ← (you have to spend on it)

三、语法的多样性：

句型多样性：4（简单句的句型多样性）＋3（复杂句的句型多样性）

1、 简单句句型多样性

Fast food contains too much fat and salt. →主谓宾

Life in big cities is very stressful →主系表

It is important for parents to set good examples →It is..

There are some robots that work in factories →There be

例：很多国家很穷 Many country are poor（主系表）/ There’re many poor countries in the world.（There be）

应该增加警察局的数量 We should increase the number of police offices.（主谓宾）/ There should be more police offices. （There be）/ It’s necessary for us to increase the police offices.（It is…）

政府应该审查媒体的内容 The government should censor the media content.（主谓宾）/ It’s necessary for the government to censor the media content. （It is…）/ The government’s censorship on the media is necessary. （主系表）/ There should be censorship on media content.（There be）

2、 复杂句句型多样性

▪   从句

▪   非谓语

▪    介词短语

在写作中涉及的句型：

▪  定语从句

▪   it is.. that

▪   When/Before/After…

▪    Although/While…

▪     If…

▪     As…

▪     Because/As/Since…

例：

▪ 父母抽烟的孩子有很大可能培养相同的习惯。Children whose parents smoke…/Children with smoking parents…

▪ 花在食物上的钱占到家度支出的最大比例。Money which is spent on food…/Money spent on food…

▪ 使用化石燃料的汽车数远远大于使用新能源的汽车数。Cars which use fossil fuel…/Cars using green energy

▪ 国家之间的文化差异导致了游客对当地人的偏见。Culture differences among different country…

▪ 65岁以上的人口占到最大比例在意大利。People over 65 years old…

四、语法的准确性：

易错句子：

1、Many scientific knowledge（不可数） can be used in teaching students.

2、Children from poor homes have few opportunity（opportunities） to receive education.

3、This policy has positive effect（effects） on companies.

4、It is not easy to find a full-time employment（不可数）（jobs）.

5、Some young people can receive trainings（不可数）.

6、News media（单数）（medium） have a （an）important influence on the public.

好啦，以上就是雅思7分最容易涉及到的语法的运用技巧了，关于雅思7分是什么水平这个问题，大家就不必再纠结了，因为想要达到雅思7分，成都申友雅思建议大家先把英语基础打好，语法和词汇一个都不能落下，然后进行专项突破，针对性地备考，最后在此复考之际，争取一举拿下7分。

Before I go to school all the time Cycling, due to distant schools, each have spent nearly an hour to get to school. Suddenly one day, my father sent me an electric motorcycles, and since then, I have to go to school every day Jizhe Ta. Electric motorcycle speed faster than a bike a lot, so whether to go to school or to any other place, it is our province to have a lot of time and effort. Electric motorcycle is very important to me, I have become part of life, but the most important point is that it is environmental protection, the entire community and the world are of utmost importance.

First, the use of electric motorcycles do not need gasoline, saving not only the individual and the state expenditure, and also to the whole world of sustainable development made a significant contribution.

Second, the noise is very small, for our ears to reduce a lot of burden.

Finally, because it no emissions, which in large measure to reduce the air pollution, if the majority of people travel in the selection of electric motorcycles, it will greatly slow down the greenhouse effect of increased speed.

五个万能雅思写作话题及遇到奇怪话题该怎么办

今天洛阳大华雅思给大家分享五个万能雅思写作话题及遇到奇怪话题该怎么办。

一、教育

1、教育应该包括哪些内容?

母题：It is generally believed that education is of vital importance to the development of individuals and the well-being of societies. What should education consist of to fulfil both these functions? (050312)

提示：本题围绕教育的两大功能来展开(个人与社会)，准备好这篇文章，即可应付教育类话题中的最大分支—教育的功能，做到以不变应万变。对于社会角度，可以从促进经济发展、增加社会流动性(social mobility)、维护社会稳定这几个方面来展开，对于个人，可以写改变思维模式、有利于就业和便利生活来写。

子题：大学应当教授理论知识还是实践技能?大学的是应当把学生培养成合格的公民还是让他们自己得益?准备未来职业最好的方法是上大学还是尽快离校积累工作经验?大学要不要扩招?中学阶段应当提供通才教育还是专才教育?要不要延长义务教育年限?要不要让农村地区的学生更容易上学?老师要教学生如何判断是非吗?

2、学校的科目谁来选择?

母题：Some people think that the government should decide which subjects students should study at the university, while others think that students should be allowed to apply for the subject they prefer. Discuss the two views and give your opinion. (060916)

提示：这类题目采取的策略就是“双批判”，因为题目中提供的两种选择往往都是错误的。

子题1：政府选课or 老师选课?学生选择所有的科目or根据兴趣自行选择?

子题2：只有学术科目重要，体育和音乐这样的课不重要，你同意吗?要不要学国际新闻?要不要学历史?要不要中学阶段就学习外语?要不要学数学哲学这类的科目?

提示：子题2与母题联系不大，需要准备这些科目各自的优点。

3、什么样的教学方式最好?

母题：Many people use distance-learning programmes (study material post, TV, Internet, etc.) to study at home, but some people think that it cannot bring the benefit as much as attending college or university. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (041113, 081023, 100515)

提示：远程教育最大的好处，就在于三个any：anybody, anywhere, any time. 缺点是缺乏师生之间以及学生之间的interaction, 缺乏教师的moral guidance, 因为没有体育课且久坐电脑前，会引发健康问题。

子题：私立学校好不好?留学好不好?要不要分快慢班?小组学习还是单独学习好?

4、谁来为学费买单?

母题：Some people believe that university students should pay all the cost of studies because university education only benefit the students themselves not the society as a whole. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (100731)

提示：这些话题都有一个共同的特征：高等教育只对学生自己有好处，因此学生应当自行为高等教育买单。这类题目的写法非常有规律，先驳斥这种理由，再交代学生自己支付学费的后果就可以了。

子题：政府要为学生买单吗?(缺点是给政府带来经济负担，这类话题写法和其它政府类话题一样)

5、孩子们要不要参加社会实践?

母题：Some school leavers travel or work for a period of time instead of going directly to university. What are the advantages and disadvantages? (030308, 050514, 090926)

提示：gap year好处就是各种能力的锻炼，缺点就是容易受到社会恶习的影响，误入歧途。

子题：要不要参加无偿社会劳动?要不要毕业去农村锻炼?要不要从小远离父母居住?

6、家庭教育

母题：Some people say that children should obey the rules of their parents and teachers, while other people think children will not be well-prepared for their adult life if they are given too much control. Discuss in both sides and give your opinion. (041120, 100520)

提示：写一下各自的好处就可以了，最后的结论是早年的时候要教授他们明辨是非，对于做错的事情要惩罚，但是也要适可而止让其兴趣爱好得到自由发展。

子题：穷人家的孩子是否早当家?家长是否应该为五岁小孩的犯罪负责?要不要把小孩趁早送到学校去?老师对儿童的智力和社会发展所起的作用大于家长吗?同龄人压力(peer pressure)的利弊?

二、生态环境、自然资源与动物保护

1、动物需要保护吗?

母题：Now many people think that we are spending too much money and time on protecting wild animals. The money should be better spent on human population. Do you agree or disagree? (031213, 110709)

提示：这类题型采取驳斥的写法来写，先驳斥这是浪费钱，因为在动物上花的钱可以通过发展旅游业来得到补偿。然后再写动物保护的意义。

子题：要不要进行动物实验?要不要把动物关在动物园里?要不要吃动物的肉?人们可以采取什么措施来保护珍稀的动植物物种?

2、环境保护谁来负责?

母题：Environmental problem is too big for individual countries and individual people to address. In other words, we have reached the stage where the only way to protect the environment is at an international level. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion? (040228, 040515, 110507)

提示：不管题目怎么出，永远记得国际合作、企业、政府、个人，都可以为环境保护做出自己的努力。所以，你要准备的内容，就是以上四个方面可以做的事情。

子题：个人能不能保护环境?个人不能保护环境，只有政府大公司才能，同意吗?公司和个人，而不是政府，可以保护环境，同意吗?很多人知道环境保护很重要，但是自己却不采取任何行动，这是为什么?

3、垃圾问题怎么办?

母题：Many people say that we have developed into a “throw-away” culture, because we are filling up our environment with so many plastic bags and rubbish that we cannot fully dispose of. To what extent do you agree with this opinion and what measures can you recommend reducing this problem? (050806)

提示：这道题目应该围绕“一次性文化”产生的原因、后果和解决方法来展开。原因：对于方便、卫生的追求。后果：破坏水源、污染土地、污染空气。解决方法：三个R：reduce, reuse, recycle。

子题：消费品的增加会导致自然环境的破坏，原因和解决方法是什么?

4、自然资源如何保护?

母题：Fossil fuels, such as coal, oil, natural gas, are used in many countries. But in some countries, the use of alternative sources of energy, including wind and solar power, are encouraged. Is this trend a positive or a negative development? (090530)、

提示：这道题目问的是新能源alternative energy的优缺点。优点：取之不尽用之不竭inexhaustible，更环保environmentally-friendly, 缺点：核能nuclear power会引发安全事故，水能hydropower会破坏生态环境upset the ecological balance, 太阳能solar power 成本太高，风能wind power会产生次声波污染infrasonic wave.

子题：淡水资源如何保护?是什么原因导致了石油、森林和淡水资源的紧张，如何解决?解决环境问题的最佳方法是提高石油的价格吗?(此题已被剑8收录)

5、交通工具

母题：One long-distance flight consumes fuel which a car uses in several years’ time, but they cause the same amount of pollution. So some people think that we should discourage non-essential flights, such as tourist travel, rather than to limit the use of cars. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (060325, 080405)

提示：这道题目是经典老题，多次在雅思考试中出现。题目中的理由有明显的逻辑漏洞，因为飞机承载的乘客数量和行驶的距离要远大于汽车，因此先驳斥理由，再讲飞机被禁止的后果(旅游业，物流业将会遭到重创)就可以了。

子题：汽车会带来哪些问题?廉价航空是否应当被推广?

6、食品安全

母题：Some people support the developments in agriculture such as factory farming and creations of new types of fruits and vegetables, while others oppose this view. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (080712)

提示：工厂化农业factory farming提高了农产品的产量，但也祸害无穷。比如大规模喷洒化学肥料chemical fertiliser和农药pesticide，集中式养殖battery farming会侵害动物权利，也使得肉类安全受到威胁。转基因食品genetically modified food虽然改善了食物的品质和产量，但是破坏生态平衡，对人体健康构成潜在的威胁。

子题：长距离运输(空运)食品的好坏，科技改变食品的好坏。

注意：本题是一个边缘话题，不能完全归类到环保类下。比如长距离运输食品与全球化类话题可以结合，科技改善食品可以与科技类话题结合。

三、科技与发明

1、现代通讯科技

母题1：People can perform everyday tasks, such as shopping and banking as well as business transactions, without meeting other people face-to-face. What are the effects of this on individuals and society as a whole? (050226, 070331)

提示：这道题目是经典的科技类话题，因为这道“无脸化交易”的题目浓缩了网络购物、电视购物、网络银行，ATM自助银行、手机银行、电话会议、视频会议等多种话题，是大家必写的话题之一。

母题2：Many employees may work at home with the modern technology. Some people claim that it can benefit only the workers, not the employers. Do you agree or disagree? (050716, 091212)

提示：“远程上班”telecommute也是一个重点话题，对于员工和雇主当然都有好处。

2、现代媒体(电视、电脑、手机)

母题1： Some people believe that time spent on television, video and computer games can be valuable for children. Others believe this has negative effects on a child. Discuss both views and give your own opinion. (080110)

提示：这道话题涵盖了电视、视频和电脑游戏的好处与坏处，可以多练习。

母题2：There are social, medical and technical problems associated with the use of mobile phones. What forms do they take? Do you agree that the problems outweigh the benefits of mobile phones? (060114)

提示：这道题目是手机类话题的经典题目，从社会、健康、科技三个角度来展开，范围很广。

子题：要不要鼓励儿童看电视?看电视和玩游戏对小孩、家庭和社会有什么影响，怎样解决?电脑不能帮助儿童学习，只会造成身心伤害，你同意吗?如何鼓励老年人使用手机和电脑?手机对于个人和社会的好处与坏处是什么?

3、替代类话题

母题：Some people think that the government should establish free libraries in each town. Others believe that it is a waste of money since people can access the Internet at home to obtain information. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion. (120112)

提示：这道题目入选母题是因为它结合了科技、文化和政府三大话题，非常值得一练。不过考虑到2012年1月12日刚刚考过，最近几个月再考的概率不会很大了。

子题：图书馆要不要提供高科技媒体诸如电脑软件和DVD?网络是否会取代博物馆和美术馆?手机和电脑正在逐渐取代书信，你同意吗?机器(机器人)取代人类工作，利弊如何?网络教育是否会取代传统课堂?(提示：这部分话题与教育类话题结合，已被归入教育类)

4、其它科技话题(与社会、生活类话题结合)

题目：飞机旅行只对富人有好处吗?现代科技使人们失去创造力吗?科技发展造成负面影响了吗?科技发展是否拉大了贫富差距?早起的科技是否比现在的科技影响更大?科技改变了人们之间的关系了吗?科技造成环境污染/使我们的生活变得更加复杂，我们是否要告别科技，过简单的生活?

提示：对于拉大贫富差距这个话题，可以网上搜索一下digital divide这个关键词。

四、媒体与广告

1、新闻与媒体

母题：News media is more influential nowadays. Some people think it is a negative development. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (090822)

提示：之所以选择这道题目做母题是因为它涵盖的范围最广，可以写报纸、电视、网络。围绕这些媒体的好处和坏处写一篇文章，顺便思考一下下面的几道子题，那么这部分的话题就可以搞定了。

子题：报纸要比其它媒体更有影响力，你同意吗?网上的信息不准确，你同意吗?我们是否应该相信记者，一个合格的记者应当具备什么样的品质?

2、媒体审查制度

母题：Nowadays, films and computer games containing violence are popular. Some people think those films and games have negative effects on society and should be banned, while others think they are just harmless relaxation. Discuss both views and give your opinion. (111029)

提示：这道题目正好概括了媒体审查制度赞成者和反对者的观点。好处是对避免青少年的模仿，降低社会暴力，坏处是破坏了影片的娱乐性，对于新闻的审查则侵犯了人们的知情权和媒体的言论自由。

子题：政府应该控制电影和电视中的暴力来降低社会中的犯罪，你同意吗?要不要严格控制媒体对于犯罪细节的报道?电视节目向公众展现灾难性的画面对个人和社会有何影响?

3、广告

母题：We are surrounded by all kinds of advertising, which significantly influence our lives. Do the positive effects of advertising outweigh its negative effects? (041016, 110625)

提示：这道题目是广告类话题中最经典的，因为这道题目的范围最广。这道题目写成双边，好处是给消费者提供信息，促进经济发展，带动就业，坏处是欺骗误导消费者，误导儿童模仿，扰乱生活。

子题：广告是否会扼杀个性，使人们看起来都一样?针对儿童的广告有何利弊?针对儿童的广告是否应当被禁止?广告应当被禁止，因为它只有坏处没有好处，你是否同意?

五、政府与城市化

1、个人与政府

母题：Some people say that it is the responsibility of individuals to save money for their own care after they retire. To what extent do you agree or disagree? (070825)

提示：关于政府与个人这类话题，肯定是些政府和个人都应当分担责任。

子题：政府要不要为个人的医疗和健康买单?个人不要向国家缴税，你同意吗?公民除了纳税以外还有别的方法来尽社会责任吗?捐助是应该直接捐助给当地社区，还是给国家和国际性慈善组织?人们是否只应当关心当地和本国的人，而不是整个世界的人?

2、政府应当投资吗?

母题：Some people say arts such as music and painting cannot directly improve the quality of people’s life, so the government shouldn’t put money on art such as music and painting, instead, they should spend more money on construction of public services. Do you agree or disagree? (040626, 041127, 070920, 110611)

提示：政府投资类的话题几乎全都是交叉类话题，分别与教育(谁应该为学费买单)、艺术、科技、健康等话题结合。这类题目的写法大同小异，好处就是围绕各自的交叉来写，如促进教育、艺术、科技的发展，促进公民的健康，等等，而坏处都是一样的：浪费政府的有限的财政lavish the tight budget of the government，或者说给政府造成了沉重的经济负担impose a heavy financial burden on the government.

子题：政府不应当投资修建剧院、体育馆，而是医疗和教育，你同意吗?艺术家应该是政府资助，还是其他来源资助?政府应当资助本土电影吗?科学研究应该被政府而不是小公司来进行，你同意吗?体育队应该由政府还是非政府来源来赞助?个人健康是否应当由非营利性公司来运营?政府应当投资修建道路吗?举办奥运会的利与弊?

雅思写作全写简单句会得几分?为了帮助大家备考雅思写作，下面我就给大家解答一下这个问题。希望大家喜欢!

雅思写作全写简单句会得几分

1.没有时态语法错误

2.没有跑题

3.题目中涉及到的都讨论过

如果达到这种程度，就是5.5分到6分的水平了。

八类雅思写作常用简单句整理

由于分析角度不同，不同语法书对英语 句子 的划分也相应有不同的分类。在此笔者主要根据雅思写作的需要，从句子结构的角度讲解集中类型的句子。按结构划分，句子可以分为简单句(simple)，并列句(compound)，复合句(complex)，和并列复合句(compound-cmplex)等。

简单句

一个独立的句子，如果只有一个主语(可以是并列主语)和一个谓语(可以是并列谓语)，这样的句子就称为简单句。简单句只能有一个主语和谓语，但是可以包含不止一个宾语、定语或状语。

1 We should ( ).

我们应该(弘扬民族 文化 )。

2 Few people can ( ).

很少人能(抵挡住毒品的诱惑)。

3 The advertisement is ( ).

该 广告 (误导人和夸大其辞)。

4 The direct cause of drug-taking is ( ).

吸毒的直接原因是(无知和好奇)。

5 The ( ) the repaidly expanding population and economic development.

(反对方把环境的恶化归咎于)人口的迅速增长和经济的快速发展。

6 The number of TV audience ( ) of 20,000 at 9 pm.

电视观众的人数在9点(达到最高点)，为2万人。

7 Animal testing ( ).

动物实验(侵犯了动物的生存权利)。

8 Traveling abroad ( ).

出国 旅游(开阔视野、丰富知识和培养独立性)。

Key:

1 carry forward our national culture

2 resist the temptation of drugs

3 misguiding and exaggerative

4 ignorance and curiosity

5 opponents attribute the deterioration of environment to

6 reaches a peak

7 violates animals’ right of subsistence

8 broadens one’s vision, enriches one’s mind and cultivates independence

雅思写作句法 总结 —简单句可以不简单

雅思写作评分标准要求 文章 表达句法结构多样化，因此我们除了使用并列句复合句之外，免不了会使用一些简单句，事实上简单也是可被大胆使用的，前提是咋们也使它变漂亮，那么接下来就给烤鸭们介绍以下拓展简单句常见的四种 方法 。

一，使用介词扩展句子

因果关系：As a result of, due to, because of

对比关系：Like, unlike, instead of

转折关系：Despite, in spite of

递进关系：Besides, in addition to

表伴随：With, without

表 方 式 By 表地点：In

表时间：Before, after

表目的：For

表方面：In, in terms of

很多职业运动员过着非常奢侈的生活。(剑 6-2)

Many sports professionals live extravagant lifestyle.

Many sports professionals live extravagant lifestyle with huge houses and cars.

Just like movie stars, many sports professionals live extravagant lifestyle with huge houses and cars.

手机似乎成了学生生活中不可缺少的一部分。

The mobile phone seems to have become an indispensable part of students’

lives, both in school and at home.

二，动词不定式表目的

为了解决堵车问题，政府应该改善公共交通。(剑 8-3 )

To solve the problem of traffic congestion, the government should improve

public transport in cities.

为了减少青少年犯罪，学校应该更加重视学生的行为问题。

To reduce youth crimes, schools should pay more attention to students’

behavior.

三，动名词作主语

我们需要推广电动汽车，那么城市空气质量就能得到改善。(剑 8-3)

We should promote electric cars and then air quality in cities could be

improved.

Promoting electric cars can effectively improve air quality in cities. Persuading people to buy electric cars would be an effective strategy for improving air quality in cities.

四，形式主语和形式宾语

刚 毕业 的人可能会难以适应工作环境。

It is difficult for new graduates to adapt to the environment of

workplaces.

The lack of experience would make it difficult for new graduates to adapt to the environment of workplaces.

雅思 作文 点评:解决环境问题方法是涨价?

The best way to solve environmental problems is to raise the price of fuel. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

As we see, smog is choking our cities and toxic chemicals are contaminating our drinking water, lowering the quality of people's living conditions. Naturally, the question is in the spotlight whether it is effective to cope with environmental problems by raising the price of fuel (这个句子写得比较特殊,因为是讲前面的 the question 和后面的同位语从句 whether it is effective… 隔开了,"凶手"是谓语部分 is in the spotlight .俗称,分割式同位语从句) . And my sense is that it is a good way, but never the best. (59words)

点评:看了第一段的语言,感觉作者英语水平应该很高,不管是从语言上也好,还是从表达的内容也好,都很老练.其次,值得一提的是,再怎么优秀的文章,结构基本还是一样的.此段也是先引入话题,然后表达自己的观点.所以,对于那些一天到晚总在研究作文结构的同学来说,你们可以休息一下了,把精力放到语言上来吧.文章的结构,特别是首尾段的太容易了,没什么多研究的。

It is true that manufacturers, whose aim is to make more profits, have to limit the amount of fuel used in production by some way (多么不好的表达!本来句子写得挺好的,结果来了句 by some way ,可以理解为通过某种方式,这样的话,应该不能算是错误的,但是从另外个角度,总觉得这个表达放在这个句子里有点"鸡立鹤群"的感觉,由于作者水平很高,所以能不能想想办法,精益求精呢?!) , due to the increase of fuel price, to cut down on their cost of products, reducing the emission in the process of manufacture (作者整句的意思是想说:"生产商的目的是获得更高的利润,所以必须通过某种方式限制生产过程所用的燃料,因为燃料价格上升了,这样做可以降低产品的成本,减少生产过程中气体排放."在我翻成中文以后,我们再来看这个句子,最后的 reducing the emission ...应该是可以理解了,它是 limit the amount of fuel used in production 的结果状语,而 to cut down on their cost of products 呢?!是目的.总结一下,这个句子完全可以当作我们翻译课上的例句,因为对翻译来说,老师最喜欢这样的句子,考验学生对句子结构的分析,此作者能写作这样的句子,水平看来和我有的一拼(小小自恋一下,呵呵...)但是,雅思考试的时候,考官是否能看懂呢?!我想考官是能够看懂的,但问题是考官会不会花心思去看?!这个是因考官而异,所以我主张,句子写得复杂没有问题,但是结构一定要清晰,不能复杂到连考官都琢磨半天,那就不好了!!!这句话,我乍看之下,能够理解,那么推定考官也能理解,所以还是不错的) . (超级长句,很不错) Also, faced with sharply growing price of common fuels, producers may turn to new types of energy resources that are economical as well as harmless to environment (还是前面加个 the 吧, environment 是可数名词) , in long term (前面逗号可以不要,然后改成 in the long term .看来作者对冠词的把握不好) 。

点评:此段充分显示了作者的语言功底,太神奇了!但是,大家有没有发现,人人看了此段都会觉得好,但是此段有没有比较难的单词呢?!答案是没有!说明什么呢?!好的作文也不需要刻意追求词汇的难度,而是词汇的广度!

But, as usual, only when the government or authoritative organizations enforce environmental regulations on producers will the latter scenario happen.( 倒装句开头,不错.另外,大家可以学个单词 ,scenario ,它在此表示"可能发生的情况"比如: The death of democracy becomes quite a likely scenario.) In other words, the authorities play an active role in preventing the excessive pollutants from pouring out into rivers or air. Without the compulsory clauses, manufacturers may choose low-cost fuel, rather than the one inoffensive to the surroundings, for, in the short term, manufacturers, especially small ones, can not afford the high expense on( 是 of 吧 ) advanced equipment that can make the most of resources, and thus, lessen the pollutants. (又是个厉害的长句,但是对冠词的把握仍然是瑕疵)

点评:语言功底好的人有什么特点?!从句吗?不是.而是非谓语动词和从句的结合。

Furthermore, on the whole, the high fuel price of energy resources can not eliminate the pollution, because there, whether more or less, has still been pollution ( whether more or less 虽然是插入语,但是感觉这句这样写有点不自然,而且后面是用完成时似乎也不对.试改为: there is still more or less pollution. ) . And, the radical approach to the environmental problems lies with the environmental awareness of producers. With the broad awareness about the importance of sustainable development, producers are willing to develop renewable energy resources, instead of being compelled to carry out the environmental policy established by the government, which is more effective but more difficult to reach. ( 长句,大家欣赏一下吧 )

So, the environmental problems can be solved by the rise in price of fuel partially, but not radically. And then, better to take advantage to all the price mechanism, administration and the public's knowledge, than to make use of only one of them. ( 348words )

点评:最后一段是败笔,或者说明显写的没前面几段好!

试改为: Therefore, raising fuel price can, to some extent, tackle the environmental problems but is far from thoroughly and the combination of price mechanism, administration and public knowledge is much better than make use of merely one of them.

总评:我想也不用多说了,8分。

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